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Through the website, audiences get an insight of the main characters, we hear about the making of ill manors from them. The website has many features such as important information like the release date and trailer. Comparing that to the Facebook page for ill manors it is a bit more simplistic with less information, less colour and entertainment. Both broadcast platforms are portraying the same message which goes along the lines of 'the working class are not noticed. The values expressed in the talk show would be more moralised, whereas the music video is more explicit involving violence.